After the first reading I can say I'm pretty satisfied and pleased, so thumb up! I could probably add that I liked a bit more the draft with Gaea being the center of everything since it actually made the start of everything a bit more clear. Although I appreciated this version as well since it seems well enough balanced to me, but I have no artistic talent so just keep this as a personal opinion. I'm sure I will have to say more after another couple of readings, so stay tuned ;) --ElvenProgrammer 13:10, 12 September 2006 (CEST)